domingo, 24 de octubre de 2010

My favourite day at the weekend

My favourite day is Saturday. I get up at eleven o´clock and I have a breakfast at half past eleven. At half past three I usually have breakfast chickend and chips.Almost always I go shopping with mi friends or the cinema.I am charmed with going shopping with my friends!When the time of never retiring comes I want to slip up of my  friends.

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  1. I have a (NO A)breakfast ...have breakfast chickend and chips (HAVE CHICKEN AND... FOR BREAKFAST) .... with mi (MY) friends ... I am charmed with (I HAVE A GOOD TIME GOING)... When the time of never retiring comes I want to slip up of my friends. (I DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS SENTENCE)
    4 MISTAKES AND ONE SENTENCE BADLY WRITTEN!!! UFFFF!!! :)

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